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PostSubject: It's Killing Me   It's Killing Me I_icon_minitimeSat May 21, 2011 6:23 am

I've got it bad, baby
and I don't know what to do;
how to act, how to speak.
I manage to make a fool of myself on a daily basis,
because I am having trouble
keeping it all inside me,
until the proper time
(which I know will never come)
and it's killing me!
I'm scared to mess this up, to ruin this good thing;
My insecurities will out me and I'll blurt it out at
the entirely wrong time, and
that you will be horrified by my indiscretion
because...

I am hopelessly in love with you
and you are not mine to have.

And it's killing me.

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PostSubject: Re: It's Killing Me   It's Killing Me I_icon_minitimeMon May 23, 2011 11:55 am

You know Stef, these can be song lyrics Panda!
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PostSubject: Re: It's Killing Me   It's Killing Me I_icon_minitimeTue May 24, 2011 2:50 am

Love it,
And yeah, Rei's right, they could be used as song lyrics.
I also came up with this line while I was reading it.

"I've got it bad, baby
and I don't know what to do;
how to act, how to speak.
I manage to be a fool because of you."

Don't feel insulted, I just came up with that. and felt I should share.
I swear to god I'm not trying to change it. I just like things that rhyme.

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PostSubject: Re: It's Killing Me   It's Killing Me I_icon_minitimeTue May 24, 2011 12:37 pm

^ It's a good line yes
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